Applied fashion feedback and mark

I have my feedback with Gemma and i was very pleased with what she had to say... my feedback form was positive too, it said i that i have a excellent body of work and i had effective and evaluative understanding of research. which i was pleased to hear and that i must carry this forward to other projects. my own photography was successful. my only down fall was that in my trend book when it was projected onto slides for my presentation the writing was blurry and too difficult to read but that i had spoke well ad kept good eye contact with the viewer. which is a shame otherwise it would have been better!

my mark was 71% which i am very pleased about!